Long Poem Shortened
by Deborah H. Doolittle

     
    Called workshopped, then edited.
    Half the words blanked out by White Out.
    Another third redacted by
    a chisel tip Sharpee. What’s left
    is the fact that you left me
    
    feeling stranded, marooned, stuck
    in an ocean of soundless nouns
    and listless verbs, feeling deprived
    of all those names and places
    that did not survive as though
    
    I had arrived out of nowhere.
    The hand that rocked the cradle,
    the boat, the dining room table,
    turned slap-happy. As if stung
    by a bee, then by many.
    
Packingtown Review – Vol. 20, Fall 2023

Deborah H. Doolittle hhas lived in lots of different places, but now calls North Carolina home. A Pushcart Prize nominee, she is the author of Floribunda (Main Street Rag) and three chapbooks, No Crazy Notions (Birch Brook Press), That Echo (Longleaf Press), and Bogbound (Orchard Street Press). Some of her poems have recently appeared (or will soon appear) in Cloudbank, Comstock Review, Kakalak, Iconoclast, Ravensperch, Slant, The Stand, and in audio format on The Writer’s Almanac. She shares a home with her husband, four housecats, and a backyard full of birds.

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